I didn’t remember what happened.
I was just three years old. All
I can remember is very loud shrieks. Then
I woke up in the hospital. They
only left me this key.
The key has beautiful patterns on it.
I feel like it’s too fragile to touch.
My mother had given it to me when we were in the car that day… just
before she died.
I keep it in an old shoebox under my bed along with my lucky marble and
some old spelling bee ribbon. Those
are the only things Mrs. Morgan hasn’t seen in my room.
Mrs. Morgan is the woman I live with in this little town house in New
Jersey. She’s a neat freak.
She’s always telling me to clean up my room, vacuum or clean the
bathroom, which I personally hate. Mom
and Dad never made me do that.
Today, in school, Jon and I were partnered up for Science which is good
because we both love science and that’s how we became best friends.
Today we are trying to figure out a mystery powder that our teacher gave
to us. Of course, because we both
love science, we found it out in about ten minutes.
It was powdered garlic, flour, and sugar.
When I got home at about 3:00, I looked under my bed, opened the shoebox
like I do every day and my mother’s key was gone!
I yelled down to Mrs. Morgan. She
replied. “Oh that old shoe boxe? Threw it away.
The garbage man just picked it up.’’
After I heard that, I screamed a big, long, high scream that I’ve never
heard myself scream before! Mrs.
Morgan came rushing up the stairs. “Good
heavens, what’s wrong with you?”
After that, I spilled the beans. I
told her everything about the key.
“Oh that good looking old key? Sold it.
Got $20.00 out of it. Could
of cost more. Oh well.”
“Who did you sell it to?” I asked loudly ( okay I was yelling but
could you blame me)?
She responded, “Mr. Long down the road…he’s been collecting
antiques. I didn’t need the key,
so I sold it to him.”
I ran down the road sprinting. When
I got to Mr. Long’s house, I knocked on the door politely.
I kept on knocking until my knuckles got red.
Nobody was there so I tried twisting the doorknob…the door opened.
Inside was very organized and tidy.
It seemed that Mr. Long liked flowers because there was flower wallpaper
that covered the whole wall. I was
starting to drift off, like I was one of the flowers, thanking God for the rain
that made my roots nice and strong and for the weather, like a warm sunny day
that made me grow big and beautiful. Then
I realized what I had come there for.
I looked down to the floor. I realized this powder was on the floor.
I took it to the lab and it seemed to be the same garlic powder Mrs.
Morgan had used.
All I needed was to follow where the powder went. Then I was pretty sure
I would find the key and maybe, the door it went to.
I kept following the powder. I
sometimes lost it, and then found it again.
Then I lost it and found it again. Finally,
I came to a door.
I knocked on the
door. This time someone opened it.
It was Mr. Long.
“Oh…Rachel.” He said in a happy but sad voice.
“I was looking for you. I
found out where the key went to. Your
dad told me the address even before you were born.
We were the best of friends. Then
something happened. I don’t know
what. Well we weren’t friends any
more. But when Mrs. Morgan sold me
that key, I thought she would do something bad with it so I took it.
Why don’t you come on in, see what’s inside!”
I went inside. I saw ton off
pictures of my mom and dad. One was
of my mom with a big tummy. She was
pregnant with me! I started to sob
and saw Mr. Long was already sobbing. They
must have really been good friends, I thought.
Mr. Long gave the key to me. I
gripped it. When I got home, I
decided that the key didn’t belong in an old shoebox, so I strung it on a
string and hung it near the window. It
twinkled. All the light shone on,
Mom, Dad’s and my light.
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